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Camping in the Galaxy by Helen Ruggieri

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Reviewed by Janet McCann

Haibun is an unusual form, a short prose piece with one or more haiku attached or inserted. It became popular in 17th century Japan, and has a growing number of practitioners here and now. It provides a new perspective, a kind of double glass in which something is seen in two distinct lenses—perhaps scientific and emotional, perhaps mythic and natural—and each perspective enhances the other. Helen Ruggieri proves to be a master of the form in Camping in the Galaxy, Haibun and Other Writings about the Natural. These pieces are mythic, natural, personal, and scientific all at once. Some are short essays and some are haibun, but they provide an unusual sense of place and interpretation of what it is like to be observer and participant in the world.

Ruggieri was born in New Jersey but moved around a lot in early years. She has written about a dozen books and chapbooks, and won several awards, including a Sasakawa Fellowship from the Nippon Foundation in 2001, the Allen Ginsberg Prize from the William Paterson College of New Jersey, and poetry prizes from the Artists Embassy International and Goose Festival, not to mention many Pushcart nominations.

These are nature poems and essays, but not à la Mary Oliver—the beauty this speaker observes is challenged, threatened. Wonder alternates with sadness and regret. The observer does really seem to be “camping”—the poems are often from the perspective of someone moving from place to place, seeing beauty and destruction. The essays range from near-magical exploration of nature to practical arguments. An example of the latter is the argument against lawns, which begins:

The lawn, that greensward, that image of suburbia, that beautiful clipped carpet of green drifting away to the road, that setting for our jewel of a house, that garden of the rich, that useless piece of pie the middle class appropriated, that lawn is killing us, killing us. It wastes more water, more leisure hours, takes up more landfill room, gathers more chemicals, pollutes more groundwater, and is more dangerous to our genes, general health and welfare than almost any other American infatuation except the automobile. (63)

The essay goes on to demonstrate its thesis and suggest alternatives—beautifully and lovingly presented. A major theme of this collection is gardening—all aspects of it—and the specifics of this practice make the reader wish to be also a midwife to the earth’s fruition.

Of course as a poet I favor the haibun, enjoying the blend of prose and poetry the mixed-genre form provides. Most of Ruggieri’s are the more traditional variety with a single haiku following a prose paragraph, but some contain more than one haiku as comment and link.

One cannot selectively quote from haibun, because the effect is in the combination of poetry and prose. Therefore I will quote a short one, ”Ataensic.” (Another brooding presence in this book is Native American folklore.) Ataensic, the Iroquois mother goddess, fell through a hole in the sky after being rejected by the heavenly beings for violating their rules. Birds carried her down to the sea and set her on the back of a turtle, which became her home (Turtle Island.)


Ataensic was looking down through the hole under the roots of the word tree when she fell, dropping and dropping into the void. Below, small friends saw her coming and turtle offered his back and a place for her. Muskrat dove deep for mud and the birds chorused to direct her fall, spinning the winds like a woven net with the magnetic sweep of their wings.

And so the world began.

the turtle’s back
a Cambrian shield
against chaos (p. 81)  

This book is rich in myth, myth being, according to one essay, a basic human need to give life meaning. She is not supporting a particular myth but rather looking at the process of mythology itself. One essay discusses the rituals of the past, including the history of Groundhog Day, and comments, “The remnants of these abandoned rituals resurface as a parody of themselves…This is a part of the past we drag with us, We can follow these archetypes back to some planetary imperative, perhaps even part of the DNA of our species. “ (p. 135)

This collection gives a strong sense of the land that was, the land that is, and the land that could be. It explores myth and science, overlapping one with the other, using each to illuminate the other. It is definitely a book for the twenty-first century, where the sheer romantic immersion in nature no longer seems realistic to us, although we long for it still.

Camping in the Galaxy, Haibun and Other Writings about the Natural
by Helen Ruggieri.
Wood Thrush Books: Swanton, Vermont. 146 pp.
ISBN 9780990334392. $14.95

Journals publishing Janet McCann’s work include Kansas Quarterly, Parnassus, Nimrod, Sou’wester, America, Christian Century, Christianity And Literature, New York Quarterly, Tendril, and others. A 1989 NEA Creative Writing Fellowship winner, she taught at Texas A & M University from 1969-2016, and is now Professor Emerita. She has co-edited anthologies with David Craig, Odd Angles Of Heaven (Shaw, 1994), Place Of Passage (Story Line, 2000), and Poems Of Francis And Clare (St. Anthony Messenger, 2004), and written scholarly books and textbooks. Most recent poetry collection: The Crone At The Casino (Lamar University Press, 2014).


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